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It’s like counting
Saturn’s rings,
hash marks
along your limbs -
remembering a time
when

‘just one more’

made you feel better.

- & you’re sitting there
wondering why
Draco, stuck in limbo
always looks like he’s


falling.
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i.
    just a mimicry, really;
    uncompromisingly
    desperate to shine.


ii.
    counterfeit & clockwise,
    tasting words on her
    unworthy tongue.


iii.
    with a dysfunctional mind
    & apocryphal dictionary,
    she cannot clone it all.


iv.
    "say anything," the pen
    whispers as she trembles
    among ink-scented fraudulence.


v.
    but she just laughs & plays the part,
    forgetting what the pages told her:
    "truth is stranger than fiction."
Sometimes, I really hate writing.
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Worthless,
the name that cuts like a knife,
Me,
it's all that you see inside,
My heart,
is breaking with every breath I take
The lies,
the only thing I can't seem to face.
I'm not needed..
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I’ve got this arrow
curled around my finger
like Apollo’s heart
& your nicknames
engraved on the inside
of my lungs.

I don’t want to write
pretty little stanzas
or pick at the seams
of your poetry
like some deadbeat
psychology major -

I want to
scribble profanities
all over everything;
shoot down your moon
& wear her
like a charm
around ink stained
wrists.

I want to
   take you
       to the stars,
                  & leave you there.
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                                                i.
                                                precious moments-
                                                featherweight.


                                                ii.
                                                time heals, remember?


                                                iii.
                                                burying despair: death.


                                                iv.
                                                grandfather time, immortal?


                                                v.
                                                on loving counterclockwise.


                                                vi.
                                                betrayal-
                                                lifetime's scar.


                                                vii.
                                                sprouting hope: birth.


                                                viii.
                                                split-second regrets.


                                                ix.
                                                divorce-
                                                a countdown.
                                               

                                                x. palmistry: singles therapy.          
A few micro poems.
I thought I'd give it a good ol' gaga try. :heart:

Your feedback, as always,
is both highly anticipated and appreciated. :eager:

COMMENTS ARE ALWAYS, ALWAYS LOVED!! THANK YOU!! :love:
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Critique:
Which line did you like the least?
Which line did you like the most?
Two-cents please?
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Eat.
    Don't eat.
Take it easy.
        Work out until you pass out.
Get help.Tell someone.
            Keep it a secret. It's only for you and me.
You're perfect.
                You're worthless.
You're beautiful.
                    You're disgusting.
Why won't you listen?
                        They don't understand.
Let me help you.
                            You don't understand.
Show me.
                                No!
I love you..
                                    You hate me.
Forget it.
                                        See.
I'm leaving.
                                            I told you.
"...."
                                                 I'm alone..
Logic has been defeated.
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It was raining
when we kissed for the first time,
for the last time.

Thin rivulets
sunk into the shrunken space
between our bodies
and divided us
like nothing could before,
like everything will
from now
until that never again
when we will
see each other once more,
no more.

Your eyes were
that bewitching shade
of dull brown blue
with all of the light darkness
whirling
in a placid pond
around a pupil
overflowing with vacancy,
and me
and my frowning smile.

The winter heat
fell like a rising tide
and,
for our every breath
was another death
so black and full of life --
embracing our boiled ice skin
as we drew apart,
came together and broke free
without letting go,
without holding on.

I couldn't help
but to be moved
by the unwavering contradictions
of your smiling mouth,
of your leaking eyes
and the rapid stillness
of your heart
and the way it silently drummed
against my palm,
against my cheek,
against my better judgment.

I kissed you for the first time,
for the last time,
one more time
and, with my lips sealed
in a deafening whisper
I found myself
begging so insistently...

"Leave now
and please don't go."
So there I was, sitting in my bed, laptop on my legs, perusing youtube and listening to random music when "Fix You" by Coldplay came on and... this came out of me.
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You are a yellow blood in this. More YouTube reffs. I know you like it, don't denniiieeeeeee.
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You sighed boredly as you werre forced to stare at the computer screen. Karkat was forcing you to watch another one of his crappy RomComs. GOG! You wanted him to cull you now, to put you out of your misery.

You groaned in annoyance as Karkat shushed you.

" _____! Pay attention! This is the best part! "

No one dared to save you. They would only be pulled in to watch the movie becuase of Karkles.

The Knight of Causing Bordem.

" Is it almost done yetttttt? "

" _____, it's still in the climax! SHHHHHHH! "

You weren't even paying attention to the screen as you dozed off. While you were in your little day dream land, you heard a voice all out for you.

" Wha? "

" ____! ____! ____! SIS! SIS SIS SIS! _____________________________________!!!!!!!! "

Your head banged against the table in a greater annoyance. Just great, it was the stupid juggalo, Gamzee Makara.

" ______! SIS! I NEED TO ASK YOU SOMETHING! "

You sighed and raised your head to Gamzee.

" GM..... Can't you wait 'til after I'm done surviving another one of KV's RomComs? You can ask if I don't die. " Karkat took his gaze off of the screen and glared at you. " Are you implying something _last_name_? " " Maybe I am, maybe I'm not.~ " Karkat growled and turned his attention to the screen.

You looked at Gamzee once more and kept a bored straight face.

" No. No. I HAVE to ask you now! It's really important! " You cokced an eyebrow at him. " More important than Faygo? " " YES! " You heard Karkat growl once more and smirked. " Fine, GM , ask away.~ " " AND MAKE IT FAST! "

" Ok! Ok! HONK! " Gamzee raised his hands in a defenceive manner.

" So _____sis. If one of your eyes is RED and the other is BLUE....... Does that mean that you can see in, " he mini squealed as you literally saw rainbows in his eyes, " 3-DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!?? "

Karkat face tabled so hard that the sound echoed arcoss the room.

" Gamzee..... I don't know how to explain this to you, but........ That's called NORMAL vision! "
Since Sol calls everyone by second letter KarKat. Skip ar = KK. GamZee. Skip am= GZ. And so on.

You will do it by first and last name. Gamzee Makara= GM. Karkat Vantas= KV, and so on.

Hurray for YouTube reffereances!~
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In The Daylight

A false downfall
An unexpected revival

Sunset to moonset
Shining through darkness

Life...redefined
Death...redesigned

In the valley of promises- I will fear no end
On the brink of weakness- I will ascend

-
Roads of the toughest
Paths of the darkest

I conditioned my flawed limits
So fearful memories won't be paralytic

I had to raise my own spirit
Strength and endurance become so vivid

A chance for change / A moment of fate
A time to make peace / A brief feeling of creed
A sealing of my slate / A silencing of my mistakes
A secret ready to be freed / A chain soon-to-be incomplete


Pain and peace are infinite
Judge the wrath of the wicked

Victims can be vengeful or forgiving
Prolific tears are forever listening

To the cryptic lyrics that layout life's experiences
A few simplistic words can become so endearing

-
And I start again
Making the possible amends

Sunrise to moonrise
I continue to survive

Recovered....damage
Empowered...courage

Through my unbroken eyes- I am still alive
Inside my revitalized light- my soul has been immortalized
It wasn't my time
As I got a second chance at life
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This poem is written for my project, titled "The Other Side Of The Sky"
In volume one: Memories Of One

In The Daylight -
In The Moonlight - Not Yet Written
In The Snowfall
In The Snowfall

I remember it
As if it was just last night
Our surroundings were lit
Illuminated by the surfaces covered in white

The way you smiled
It gave me comfort inside
And my heart seemed to be veiled
Knowing you have become a part of my life
-
Step   by   step
I stopped blinking
As   we   tread
I ceased breathing
Chills   were   sent
Our hands touching
Our   lips   met

Gazing at you is a must
You curiously peered up
As snowflakes danced down towards us
And it dawned on me that I was madly in love

Mesmerizing   my   soul
Spreading a calming warmth
Into   my   core
I held you in my arms
I   felt   whole
Connected our hearts
Alone  

In The Rainfall
In The Rainfall

Pent-up
Overly repressed
Dripping with blame

Thoughts erupt
Pain expressed
Drowning from hate

I felt...
I felt...
I felt your anger

I held...
I held...
I held my pieces together
-
I always wait for the right moment
To finally break down

I need the pain to flow perfect
To let it all out

I'm reaching for my tainted core / I won't let you corrupt me anymore
You will not be a part of me / This is not how it's going to be

I always wait for the oncoming storm
That's the only time

Endure it all until the promised calm
Just to call it mine
-
Set free
Sorrows shattered
I am myself again

Grief released
Clouds scatter
It's gone

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My mind is spinning without a rest
emotions whirl and twirl around
A merry-go-round gaining speed
Until the world blurrs before my eyes
What's happening? What's going on?

The simplest thought slips away
Right from my mind, fading so fast
Trying to focus, I stare and stare
Until my eyes are heavy and unclear.  
I don't understand, what is going on...


Emotions rise and fall again
Within the blink of an eye
I'm crying, laughing, and depressed
A rollercoaster ride that never ends
Am I losing my mind in this ?

I try to close my eyes and rest
But the world spins me around
I feel like I am failing this test
Voices and noisies echo in my mind
Please I call, falling to the ground.


Wait, there is an anchor here
A silent echo in my ear reveals
I reach out and grasp a hand
Hold it while the storm dies down
And slowly, safely we both land
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