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Photographed Journey #1

Mon May 20, 2013, 2:24 AM


Once you have traveled, the voyage never ends, but is played out over and over again in the quietest chambers. The mind can never break off from the journey. - Pat Conroy


Kaisma Lake by `vanmall
Kaisma Lake

For this spring and summer I gave myself two promises and so far I have kept them quite well. First promise was to get back on to my mountain bike and ride with it as much as possible and my second promise was to take my camera with me as much as possible and take pictures of things that might not seem as important. I hope that combining these two will at the end give a wonderful result, as well as keep me healthy and improve my skills. Since I am determined to use only manual settings on my camera then these pictures might not look the best but I'll hope you enjoy this article.
But since I do like to tell stories anyway then I have decided to share my journey with you. Every once in a while I will post some stories of it over here, as well as my photography group #TheFocusZero.

Lake2 by `vanmall
Path around the lake with bog surrounding it

This time I had an opportunity to take my mom and my grandma to a little trip around one of the lakes we have about 80 kilometers away from my home town, called Kaisma lake. Since the lake isn't that big (140,4 hectares or 356 acres) then we decided to hike around the lake with a distance around 6 kilometers or a bit more. Although my grandma is almost 80 years old, she was still happy and excited to take this trip with us plus the weather was quite nice as well, giving a little extra bonus to our trip.
We knew that there should be a path around the lake but we didn't know how good it would be, so we geared up for the worse and began our journey. It later turned out that this path wasn't that bad at all, but since most of the lake is surrounded by bog, then it was naturally a little wet.

Bog by `vanmall
Second part of the path in a bog


On our way around the lake we found that nature can sometimes be so different in a small area. First part went trough a big pine forest giving us a beautiful and majestic view with blooming bushes and too many anthills to count. These trees protected us from the sun and it was nice and cool to walk around.
Second part of the path went trough a bog. If you have seen bog before then you know how it is. Many small trees about your height, usually pines that never grow bigger and water or wet moss all around you. Since there weren't any real paths either then we were glad that our footwear was wisely selected. Around autumn you can find many great berries from there, if you know what to look for.
And the third and final part of the path went trough a birch forest where we found many blooming flowers.

Birch Forest by `vanmall
Final part of the path with birch forest


Sometimes it is good to go outside and to just walk around and this was definitely one of these occasions. Although this lake is quite popular because of the fish you can get from here, it is still mostly untouched. But locals around the lake seem to love this place and with their own time and resources they have build many benches and walkways around the lake for easier access, so that all could enjoy it.

Flowers Around Lake by `vanmall
Flowers and plants around the lake


Around this time of the year you can also find many beautiful flowers and plants around the lake. Many of them only grow in wet places like this and bloom only for a short time.
At the end of this journey all three of us were a bit exhausted but happy that we decided to take this trip. It wasn't a long path to take but if you have to walk in a water most of the time then it can still exhaust you. I was definitely happy that I had taken my mountain bike a bit more seriously this year because my legs didn't even feel a thing. And if we all could take this trip then you can definitely go out as well and do something similar. Don't stay home, go out and explore!

Me At The Lake by `vanmall
Me with my fancy footwear at the end of this trip


Have fun and enjoy!


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Hello everyone,
I'm on the look out for top on top art. My collections alone aren't going to cut it. I need you to spread the word and relay back to me there username and work. Remember, no fan works! It must be all complety original. It can be inspired from a show just not something i will reconize right off the bat. Also I'll be browsing some members art as well for more gallery contributions.
Critiques, as well as any other textual matter, should create a pleasurable reading experience rather than functioning as a premade manual in which you fill in the gaps - every work needs to differ and give a salutary lesson. However, there are few points that should be followed when judging someone's work (keep in mind that these are just my beliefs and should not be taken for granted):

• Firstly, try to provide constructed and carefully presented ideas; meaning, plan what and when you are going to say - every review, essay, or critique should consist of a introduction, main part, and conclusion containing razor-sharp and original argumentation.

• Avoid the first-person form (I, we). This point of view is primarily used for autobiographical writing and should be evaded as much as possible.

• Enlarge your vocabulary. There are a lot of ways to express yourself; do not stop at simple word stock, for example, instead of 'use' implement something like 'utilize', 'apply', 'operate', 'exert', or 'practice'. Yet, be careful to employ them correctly (that mainly goes for foreign writers).

• Take your time. You do not have any deadlines nor is your life in any danger; therefore, be patient when writing - do not rush anything as you will make a lot of mistakes. Mostly your mind clears out when taking short naps or doing other activities. Practice that because afterwards it is much easier to spot errors.

• Dream-dream, talk-talk, and zero in the brainbox. Do not criticize something you have little or no experience about, because if facing anyone more erudite in the topic, you are bound to be humiliated.

• Try to keep it short and easy on the eyes. Do not be fooled, it is always good to have a page or two of reading material; however, it is also an art to write concise and easy apprehensible sentences, and generally people do not like reading much. I suggest restricting yourself to 250 words - not more, not less.

• Good artists imitate, great artists steal. There is no point sitting around and trying to squeeze out an idea from yourself if nothing comes to mind, and if you truly want to give a proper critique, then surf around the net and borrow some ideas. Although, do not plagiarize.

• Be confident and fair. Do not rely on deviantART's FAQ too much because rating an artwork is a tedious process and there's no real manual you could always follow. I, for instance, always have problems evaluating fanart.

• Represent your basic knowledge of grammar. "Your writin' a crtque not comenzs." I always get turned away when seeing something similar, so keep in mind that you are doing a formal critique. Therefore, putting some effort in creating readable content only shows your intellectual level. Also, if you want to master punctuation, I would suggest visiting grammarbook.com as a great guide.

• Set yourself a hard to reach criterion but make it a legitimate one. Start with finding a craft which you consider the most favourable, and one that is furthest from your ideal. Thus you instantly create a valid rating system on which bases it will be much easier to evaluate if any further artwork is good or not.

• And lastly, "If you shall examine any craft by just its appeal, then you'll bound to find yourself attached to one narrow truth. Of course, trying to see what isn't there will also make you an overly-sentimental-dumbo so keeping a tight psychological framework and evaluation skills is essential to see the greatness of a craft."

That is that, but how is it with receiving it? Well, I shall talk about it another time.
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