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I think there needs to be more of these.


Recolor and edit images of official Sonic character's. DON'T There is no skill or creativity. This is also considered stealing someone else's art, and is why everyone hates the fandom.

Direct connection to official characters  (ie: Sonic's lost long brother, Shadow's son) DON'T It's incredibly cliche, and very very stupid. Your character should not in any way, shape, or form change the already existing timeline of the original story.

Romantic relationships with official characters. DON'T Don't care how much you like the character, this also effects the original story, and is very bad. Do you seriously think Shadow would fall in love with your character? 

Super forms from collecting the chaos emeralds of anything similar to. DON'T It takes away the uniqueness of Super Sonic. In the story, there is an actual reason why he can become super. If everyone can go super, than what's so super about it? Powered up forms are fine, but leave out collecting a set amount of objects to go super saiyan.

Hybrids. DON'T At least make sense. A hedgehog cat makes no sense what-so-ever. If you want to make a hybrid character so bad, use species that would actually make sense like a wolf-fox, or lion-tiger. And don't use that "experiment" bull. Who in the right mind will spent time and money to make some ridiculous hybrid creature? And what for?

"Eggman killed my parents!" DON'T Eggman doesn't kill, or at least hasn't killed. He uses small fluffy animals to power his robots for Christ sake.

Incredibly agsty character. DON'T Agst is the biggest overused personality trait. So many characters are even more angsty than Shadow. This also makes the character look like a wuss, and ultimately makes your character incredibly boring if done wrong. We don't need more painfully pathetic emo kids. At least Shadow isn't a pussy. 

Shy personality with very slutty and revealing clothing. DON'T Your character's appearance should reflect the character's personality. I should be able to look at your character and at least have a hint of how your character may act.

Huge tits. DON'T I see it all the time. They shouldn't be backbreaking big, they should be proportionate with the character's body.

Very plain blank T-shirt and jeans outfit. DON'T When a character looks like an average joe, it's boring. Character's should have...CHARACTER!

Rainbows. DON'T My eyes.

Characters with huge muscles. DON'T It is by far the dumbest thing I have ever seen.

No true character flaws. DON'T Character's NEEEEED flaws in order to make them interesting. 

Shit ton of accessories and details. DON'T Characters should not be have a lot of details in their design. Don't make them plain, but don't throw on a shit ton of useless crap in order to make it look more "unique"

Sonic OC's with human features/anthro. DON'T Sonic OC's should look like Sonic characters. They need to have Mobian anatomy and proportions. Otherwise they look more like Anthro, or down right gross.

Hedgehogs. DON'T It's alright to use hedgehogs, but before making your character, think about it first. How many hedgehog/echidna/fox oc's are out there? Do you really wanna be another one? There are a lot, and usually, hedgehogs turn me off.

A character with more than one tail. DON'T That takes away the uniqueness of Tails. Tails having too tails is weird enough to begin with, but it is his biggest defining characteristic. Don't take it away from him.

Characters with more than one power (ie: Darkness AND fire). DON'T If a character is to have a power, it shall be a SINGLE power, and should be a defining characteristic. Having more than one instantly makes your character overpowered, and uninteresting.

Godlike. DON'T Please just, no. Every character needs flaws and limits. They need to be killable so I can kill them for being so bad! All joking aside, godlike characters are an instant turn off.

Wields a keybade. DON'T Stop it. Stahp et. 

Simple plain everyday names. DON'T Dave, John, Brandon, BORING. Think of a name that 'pops' or you don't hear everyday! 

Runs faster than Sonic DON'T That is STUPID. Again, it takes away the uniqueness of the character.

Zebra that looks like a cat. DON'T C'mon now, are you even trying?

Dad color schemes. DON'T A character needs contrast in color to make the design more appealing. Oranges and Blues, Purples and Yellows, Reds and Greens. The secondary color should compliment the primary to make it pop more. Lance for example, the gold really pops against the blue, does it not? He did catch your eye didn't he~?

More to come maybe XD
  • Mood: Rant
Okay, first I want to update on my progress with sketching the pages. I have done five pages so far. Aren't I just the fastest sketcher ever? Such a fast sketcher I am :I

Also, I said I would do a livestream today, but sorry; turns out I need to wake up early tomorrow so no livestream. Hopefully I'll do one tomorrow though, I still have that unfinished pic from the last one that I can finish. And hell, I can start on the pages as well. Although the first page, being a first page, doesn't really have anything important.

Also a comment on my last 'Random thought' about characters with multiply portrayed personalities, I now realize I worded most of that entirely wrong. While it is true that characters can be portrayed differently due to who's writing the story, that's not what I meant at all. What I meant was that in my stories specifically they act differently. Like when they're 'on the job' such as 'Play the game' or 'Meet me at the park' they are in their 'monster mode' where they act more like a monster, as in mostly no mercy and only interested in malicious things. In other ones that are stories, such as 'Forgotten past' or 'escape the asylum' they are in their character mode, where they act more how they would act around friends or family, basically someone they won't want to prey on.

Also, I've decided that I do want to post that random thought about evolution, because I want to take every chance I get to prove 'I can draw/write whatever the fuck I want and if you bitch I really don't give a flying fuck.' Don't worry I don't bash anyone or religions like that, I'm not one to make fun of someone because of their beliefs. Unless you believe something stupid like the universe was created by a magical alicorn who sent her sister to the moon. Then there's something wrong with you.


Stole this from Pocky :iconpocket-chocolate: XD

Rules: 
You must make an OC do this.
You don't have to tag others.
You may have multiple OCs.

I shall choose same ones as last time, Kage, Zehndy, Zippy, and Xavy. And also, FINALLY a tag thing that doesn't demand you tag someone else! Srsly.

1. Hmmm, any injuries?
Kage: Two scars on my face.
Zehnder: Lot's, but they'll clear up soon.
Zippers: Not really.
Xavier: No, hah no one's good enough to hurt me.


2. How many years have you existed?
Kage: (A little over five months.)
Zehnder: (Maybe four months)
Zippers: (Maybe three months)
Xavier: (This version of him about four months, however the old character he is inspired from is from 2010)


3. What kind of person are you? Ex: Quiet, loud, violent, cheerful.
Kage: I'm sexy. You know I am.
Zehnder: Badass.
Zippers: Adorable :3 or so I'm told.
Xavier: Awesome.


4. Do you dream, if yes what about?
Kage: Emm . . . Kind of a vague question, it's not like every person only dreams about one specific thing.
Zehnder: Killing people. But then I realize I'm not dreaming, it's real life and I'm just drunk.
Zippers: Kitties and ponies and zippers and rainbows and making everyone pretty :3
Xavier: eyyyyyyyyy sexy lady


5. Favourite supernatural creature?
Kage: (couldn't think of anything here)
Zehnder: (couldn't think of anything here)
Zippers: Jackalopes are soooo cute.
Xavier: Serpent like dragons I guess, have a tattoo of one.


6. Practical jokes anyone? If so Pranker or Victim?
Kage: Pranker
Zehnder: Pranker, although my jokes usually involve lots of pain.
Zippers: I don't want to prank anyone, that might hurt their feelings ;A;
Xavier: Pranker


7. Weapons, do you have them, if you do how good are you with them?
Kage: I mostly use my claws, but the occasional knife or broken bottle is fun.
Zehnder: I use my tendrils and hands.
Zippers: I have my tools, but they aren't weapons, they're not meant to hurt people.
Xavier: My two guns and a knife, although I prefer the guns.


8. Any unusual abilities, if so what are they?
Kage: Flexibility, climbing on walls, stuff like that.
Zehnder: Tendrils, walking through shadows, things like that.
Zippers: Adorableness.
Xavier: Being awesome.


9. Cooking, good or bad yours and others opinions.
Kage: Don't really cook much, usually just take what I want.
Zehnder: Never really tried it.
Zippers: I can make . . . umm . . . popcorn
Xavier: Don't really cook


10. Accents anyone?
Kage: Japanese accents
Zehnder: maybe a little, not quite sure. Usually when you have an accent if it's not strong it's hard for you to tell
Zippers: I have a British accent. . . . pffff no not really, that would be cool though.
Xavier: not really


11. Fear something, if so what?
Kage: Mostly that everyone I love will die or something.
Zehnder: I fear nothing.
-Ginga: What about the thought that Esther isn't as strong as you, so she could die?
-Zehnder: SHUT UP GINGAAAA.
Zippers: Emm . . . uhh . . . -sits in the corner and mumbles to himself- ;-;
Xavier: I fear nothing. Except maybe Splendy a little when he's crazy, but who isn't afraid of him when he's crazy.


12. Ever been chased by law officials, if so why?
Kage: Ha, many times for my 'work'
Zehnder: Yeah, they don't really chase me though, I just rip them up.
Zippers: We never really meet, I leave before them mostly.
Xavier: Shooting someone for disrespecting me.


13. Siblings. If so what are they like?
Kage: Not sure .-.
Zehnder: Well Slendy is pretty level-headed, he's easy to hang out with. Trendy won't shut up because my clothes smell like smoke. Splendy just keeps trying to hug me and or put me in some sort of ridiculous pony costume. And Smexy, he's just f-cking annoying. No means no dammit.
Zippers: No.
Xavier: Well, not my proxy self, maybe Devon has some. I don't know.


14. What's the craziest thing you have ever done?
Kage: I faked my death that one time by jumping off that building. But I fake my death maybe once every two weeks, not that crazy.
Zehnder: Letting Splendy dress me up as a mother f-cking king pony.
Zippers: I went to Japan with Zehnder once. It was weird.
Xavier: I think I robbed a bank while drunk once, don't really remember it but when I regained conciseness I saw Slender taking the money. I have no idea why I thought it was a good idea to take all the 20$ bills.


15. Who do you look up to?
Kage: hmm, don't know.
Zehnder: No one.
Zippers:  I like everyone :3 everyone has something to teach you if you just listen.
Xavier: Kind of Zehnder. and music artist like Deadmau5 and Daft punk.
  • Mood: Enjoying The Show
  • Listening to: Daft Punk
  • Reading: IT
  • Watching: South Park
  • Playing: Monster Hunter Freedom Unite

I have been Writing a lot for Dreamtalia, LOL. Here is another Shadow!Italy x Reader. This one is after an art picture I saw by SakuraIchigo15 called Loneliness. I hope You all like, I Don't Own Dreamtalia!

 

Why must I suffer alone in this place? They say there is someone out there for everyone. I am starting to doubt that.

Why must I be stuck in a place so pretty, but without anyone? I sighed and stared at the beauty unfold in front of me. All I want is someone who understands me for me. 

Why do people take me for a evil Dream Reaper? Do they every see me as a lonely person? I could feel tears try to surface in my eyes. No! I shall not cry. Right?

I couldn't try to sleep it off. No duh, I'm in a dream. I closed my eyes anyway. If I could have one wish.....

I would want someone to share this with.

READER'S POV

Pain inflicted your body, then it was quiet. You open your eyes to the bright lights, where are you? I slowly got up and winced in pain. You gripped your chest, only to see dried blood!

Your (e/c) eyes widen, what happen to you? You looked around franticly, your (h/l) hair moved around with you. This doesn't feel like heaven....nor hell. Then where is this place?

Are you even dead?

Slowly you got up, then paused before pushing onward. What happen? You tried to remember, but nothing came up. Just pain and screams of a car tires. Your memory was fuzzy after that.

You could remember your name, and everything else. But that one thing, on how you got here, is just gone. You sighed, maybe this place can give you answers? You walked into the forest, lightening bugs lit up the place.

You were awed by the beauty of this place. It looks like it came out of a dream, or a dream of a dream. You heard something, you crouched behind a bush and peered over it. A guy? Where have you seen him before? He look familiar......?

He had light brown hair and had a dark thing over the right side of his face. His arm was the same, one was normal with the light blue sleeve, and the other was dark with claw like attributes. Kind of reminded you of Kingdom Hearts Heartless. Was he a Heartless?

He looked asleep, hm? You walked up to him, his eyes were closed and he was breathing cutely. Upon closer inspection he had a shadowy curl that suck out of his hair locks. And pale skin.

You thought he looked scary yet cute. He looks so familiar, where have you seen him before. Your hand moved on it's own and lightly brushed his face. His eyes open wide. His hand quickly gripped your arm.

You looked afraid now, he was awake and looked like he could kill you. You whimpered in fear. His electric blue eye widen at the sound. His pale eye shone on your face.

He let go softly and looked at you. As if examining you? He smiled lightly, the sharp teeth scared you a bit. Who was he?

"Sorry I scared you Bella." he said cutely, was this a trick? You nodded quickly, you didn't know what to say. He seemed to sense your fear.

"My name is Shadow Italy, but you can call me Italy." your (e/c) eyes widen, you remembered reading Dreamtalia from Deviantart. You gulped softly, he was real!

You remembered reading stories about him. He was evil! A Dream Reaper! Did he bring you here? No he looked just a confused as you. He gave you a frown, as if reading your mind.

You seemed confused now. Why is he not hurting you? Is he trying to trick you? It seemed a little odd, he seemed nice. You relax a little bit, the look of hurt on his face.

"Am I really evil?" he asked you, now this was weird. He was being nice to you, but why?

"A-according to some Dreamtalia fan you a-are." you stuttered lightly, he frowned even deeper. What is with him? You thought he'd be dark, evil, and scary. He is actually kind of......sweet?

"Oh?" he breathed out, his voice sounded just like Italy's. And your just now noticing that? You nodded lightly, but not with fear. You seemed to be confused by his actions.

"And what are you doing here?" he asked you, wait he didn't bring you here? You shrugged.

"Didn't you bring me here?" he smiled and laughed lightly. Shook his head with a giggle, you blushed lightly.

"No, not that I know of." he confessed, so how did you get here? He looked at the dried blood on your chest, then tilled his head.

"Looks like you got hurt. Looks deadly also." you eyes widen, deadly? Your eyes widen at the word, the sound of screams reached your ears. But nothing else.

"I really have no idea why that is there. In truth I don't remember." you told him, he raised an eye brow. Then moved forward to you. You took a step back, he pouted lightly and moved in front of you.

"Well lets see if I can help you there." he said and his dark hand touched your (s/c) skin. His other hand ran through you (h/c) hair and relaxed you. Then pain shot through you.

READER-CHAN'S MEMORY

December was really cold. You walked passed the people to get to school. You looked at the sign, it said it was safe to walk. Home was never really home, your parents hated you. You looked to the left and right then went to walk across.

You hated your home, school was better then anywhere else on this place. That and what you read online. From what you read the dream world was better then anything.

The only reason you parents keep you alive; was because then need something to get their anger out on. You sighed and was about to get to the other side. Someone screamed out to you. tires screamed beside you.

A truck slipped on ice and was barreling to you. Your eyes widen, then it was black.

BEEP - BEEP - BEEP

"She is in a coma, and we don't know when she will wake up. You mother faked crying, your father comfort her.

"If she doesn't wake up soon, her injures will kill her." the doctor told them. You stared at your sleep body, you were dyeing!

In a flash you and Shadow!Italy was in the room. You sleep soundlessly, he knew now what happen.

"Wow, is a brutal way to be in a coma." he was normally to put people in comas. You stared at the monitor.

BEEP - BEEP - BEEP

Your heart rate was normal. You looked calm and peaceful, you mom was gripping your hand. She looked angry at you.

"*Censored* (Name) why do you have to be such a idiot." she whispered, you looked away form her. Shadow!Italy gripped your shoulder, you looked at him. He smiled at you sweetly.

Was he really evil? You questioned yourself, he seemed to be cute and sweet.

"Why did you help me?" you asked him, he looked away. Was he blushing?

"I just thought you need-" he was cut off as your lips met his. He froze, then closed his eyes. After a few moments you parted.

"Thank you." you told him, he smiled at you in a daze. You never once felt loved, so this is love? You looked at him, he cared about you. Even though you first meet, you never knew that kind of kindness.

You have a chance to go back to reality. Will you take it? He looked at you, knowing this was goodbye. You were only in a coma, if you put yourself back into your body....you can never come back.

"Well, (Name). Is this goodbye?" he asked you, sadness fell upon your heart. You didn't want to leave him. You felt like there was a reason you felt like you were meant to meet him.

Why? Maybe you were because, he was the help you have been waiting for. A chance to have someone care about you. Like the wish you made a long time ago.

FLASHBACK
Tears fell down your face, you hated it here. Your only ten and they treat you like nothing. Your not a doll! Your a human being!

But each day they treated you like a doll. You only wanted to have someone who cares about you. You closed your eyes. And looked outside into the night sky. One tiny star shined out.

You sighed, and looked at it. Then closed your eyes.

"Please, let me find someone who will love me for me." you whispered, but it will never come true. You curled up to bed, and closed your eyes.

END OF FLASHBACK

You looked at him, you made that wish over nine years ago. Now your here, and this man. Italy....Shadow!Italy showed you kindness. You knew that this was meant to happen.

Besides, if you went back. It would just be the same torment. You watched him turn around to walk away. Then gripped his shadow hand. He turned around in shock, you smiled at him.

"No this is not goodbye." you told him, his eyes were wide. Then he smiled, and pulled you close to him. His breathing hitting you head, ruffled your hair lightly.

"But, you may wake up." he said in a sad tone, you made a thinking face. Your mom left you alone after hearing your father call for you. You walked up to a cart of needles.

Shadow!Italy tilled his head in confusion. You picked up a needle, oddly enough you did pick up something, that read poison. You looked at him, he smiled sadly. You were going to kill yourself.

You walked up to your body and gripped your wrist. Then stabbed the needle in your veins, pain hit you then ebbed away.

BEEP - BEEP - BEEEEEEEEP

Your heart stopped beating. You quickly threw away the needle as the doctors rushed in there.

Your mother cried into your shirt, you knew it was fake. Your father looked at the doctor, he shook his head.

Shadow!Italy was surprised you did something like that. You turned to him and smiled.

"Now I won't." you told him, he smiled, then held out his hand for you. Then spoke in a Italy's voice.

"Vee~ Want to come with me~?" you giggled and gripped the hand, then disappeared in the dream world.

-

Fireflies circled around a man and you. You rested your head onto his chest, his breaths sounded like a heart beat. All and all, he really wasn't evil. You knew this now, his arms warped around your waist.

Your both got your wish. Neither of you was alone now. It was truly a Happily Ever After.

THE END~

I hope It wasn't rushed, but I tried my best. Most say he is misunderstood. I hope you liked it. I will be taking all my oneshots and posting them up on my fanfiction. Forestspirit Of Thunderclan. Hope you liked!

 

 

 

Let;s be honest, guys, shock value is a major problem with Flynn's writing. Quite a few times, twists are done to surprise and offset readers more than they are for good storytelling, and often have another solution that could have been just as, if not more servicable, and wouldn't have been a shock. So, I'm going to list them off.

Since I'm tired of beating this dead horse, I'll put 172 on the list. Honestly, I'm just bored of this buggered-up crap now, and I'd rather spend my time finding another way around it than complaining about it, but for completeness' sake, here it is:

The Twist: Fiona Fox, Sonic's girlfriend, team medic, actually original character, and potential significant other for Tails, is actually evil and has been cheating on Sonic with Scourge.

The problem: It completely derails her character and is pretty much a non-lethal example of being stuffed into the fridge.

The solution: Of these, there are many, so I'll only list two so we can get on to a new topic. 1: Fiona develops in a way that fits with her character. She gets more depth (As opposed to just becoming a different sort of shallow- at least good Fiona had the excuse of not being properly developed yet. Bad Fiona is just bland), and her character can progress. She also parts with Sonic on amicable terms and they remain friends afterwards. Explore the aspects of her character that were already there, instead of removing them and adding new ones with no rhyme or reason other than giving Scourge some arm candy. If you absolutely have to preserve the twist, then 2) Use a new character for this purpose. F.I.N.O is just that, Fiona In Name Only. Her personality is different. Her skillset is different. Her backstory is altered. Her goddamn appearance is different. The only link is name and species.


Now, going in order:

1) Anonymous

The Twist: Despite clearly being set up as Robotnik Prime, Anonymous is revealed to instead be ADAM.

The problem: Robotnik Prime was clearly shown in silhouette as Anonymous is previous issues. In changing him to ADAM, the series lost the potential for the return of an actual serious, yet still classic Sonic villain, which would have opened up huge storytelling opportunities. All ADAM did as anonymous was finally kill Tommy Turtle, and that could have been done by Robotnik.  Eggman also lost one of his most useful allies, and was left with no underlings except his various Starscreams, until Mecha Sally came along, and let's be honest, Mecha Sally kinda blows.

The solution: Anonymous is Robotnik Prime. Who cares if it doesn't come as a surprise, it still has much better storytelling opportunities than ADAM. THe change was only done to preserve the shock reveal, something that wouldn't have been needed if the foreshadowing wasn't utterly transparent (Flynn-era Archie cannot do foreshadowing, it seems). So, before any Flynn defenders get on their high-horse about it, here is an example of him literally changing a story for the worst to preserve a shock value reveal.


2) The Destruction Of Knothole.

The Twist: Eggman nukes Knothole off the map and traps everyone but Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, and Amy in the Egg Grapes.

The problem: Eggman manages to sneak up a frigging airstrike on the city. Said city is then replaced by something that looks almost exactly the same, but is actually made of nanobots. However, it lacks thethe iconic status that Knothole had for western fans, and New Mobotropolis just doesn't have the same ring to it.

The solution: Capture everyone without completely torching the place, but still badly damaging it. Nicole then uses the nanites from the nanite city to repair the place and form a shield over it, giving it the same properties as the new city but preserving the iconic location.


3) Knuxerjak

The Twist: The new Enerjak is Knuckles.

The problem: In a rare exception, this isn't a problem. Knuxerjak is actually a pretty damn good story arc. The only really bad thing about it is Locke dying without closure.

The solution: Give Knuckles and Locke some closure before the latter dies. Done.


Then it went a way for a while. Flynn just told new stories, that weren't entirely horrible. On the whole, the things between Knuxerjak and the end of the 100s were readable, aside from a few black spots, and those weren't due to shock value. Then it returned in force.


4) More Face Heel Turns.

The Twist: Nicole is turned into Iron Nicole by plot convenience and Espio turns out to be a spy for the Dominion.

The Problem: Nicole, being from a timeline where the heroes already knew about the Iron Dominion, should have had a Magitek resistance from the get-go. It's not hard, apparently Sally can do it from inside Nicole's processor by waving her arms a bit. Evidently it was already there, so why was it not already active? As for Espio, it kinda destroys the Chaotix team dynamic if he's more worried about his honour to a bunch of chatoic neutral ninja than his friends.

The Solution: Don't do them. SImple as.


5) Yes, another Face Heel Turn.

The Twist: Geoffrey St. John, staunch supporter of the Acorns and thorn in Sonic's side for this exact reason, turns out to be evil all along and working for Naugus, despite Naugus having the mental faculties of a non-Mobian dog for a long while now.

The Problem: Just... just read that through again and tell me if it makes any sense. According to Geoffrey, Naugus is the rightful king because Max said he could be the next king in exchange for not being a complete dick to him in the Void. Max promised the crown of the Kingdom of Acorn. The Kingdom of Acorn ceased to exist in 179 and the nation is now the Republic of Acorn, which, as a constitutional monarchy, is an entirely different method of government. SO he technically has no right to lead it if Elias wants to pass the crown to his sister or daughter. Furthermore, Naugus has time and again proved to be a horrible choice for a leader by doing such things as attempting to get the Mobians and Robians to kill each other. Also, Geoffrey has a wife who is wholly loyal to the Acorns.

The Solution: Either don't do it, or have Geoffrey really be the mole, trying to use Mogul's willingness to revive Naugus to expose that he is still a villain. Then quietly explain this to Sonic afterwards.


6)  Only Mostly Dead.

The Twist: Hershey St. John is stated to be dead by Geoffrey during a fight with the heroes.

The Problem: This death wasn't even meant to be a real thing: Hershey was supposed to turn up alive. It's another example of being Stuffed into the Fridge: It's a catalyst to drive Geoffrey over the despair event horizon. It's a shock reveal with no substance to provide a motive for another shock reveal.

The Solution: Have Geoffrey dodge the question, and later imply that Mogul/Naugus/both are keeping Hershey as a hostage for blackmailing purposes.


7) Only Mostly Dead again.

The Twist: Sally is gunned down during an assault on the Death Egg, while Sonic is too busy enjoying himself during the fight with Silver Sonic.

The Problem: First off, why did the Freedom Fighters only send Sonic and Sally into the Death Egg (Well, Nicole too, but she has no body up there)? Tails, Amy, Antoine, Bunnie, Rotor, etcetera were doing nothing to help. Oh, they were guarding Geoffrey? Put him in a cell uunder accusation of treason and go and help! Tails and Amy ferry them there, and then just fly around outside in the Tornado doing nothing. Second, when it's something as serious as the Death Egg, Sonic would not put aside the mission in order to have a fight with a robot. Third, this death was pointless. Fans will say that it raises the stakes for Sonic to fix things after Genesis, but looking at Genesis, it's a world where only four of his friends are around, and Eggman can roboticize anyone. That's high enough.

The solution: Send more Freedom FIghters in, have Sonic not get distracted so easily, and don't shoot Sally because it's pointless and only done to shock the readership again.


8) Not dead, just painfully turned into a mindless gynoid.

The Twist: Sally, through plot contrivance, is forced to Roboticize herself to stop Eggman's plan.

The Problem: [link] explains it quite nicely. The situation is entirely forced, down to the time they have left fluctuating and Sally halting the list after the first option. Nicole also should be more than powerful enough to get through present-tense tech, since she's from the future and the firewalls should not be anywhere near powerful enough to stop her.

The Solution: If you're going to roboticize Sally, have it get set up differently than this.


9) It's magic, they don't have to explain it.

The Twist: Bunnie gets deroboticized by Naugus.

The Problem: Bunnie's limbs have been stated multiple times to be impossible to deroboticize, due to complicated medical reasons that mainly relate to preserving the status quo. Naugus fixes it with magic. By accident. He somehow manages to turn three separate limbs that have no organic qualities and never have had them into three limbs perfectly suited in size, mass, species, breed, blood type, muscalature and colour. By accident. People have said that having a Chaos Emerald justifies it. No it doesn't. If Chaos Emeralds were all you needed for that, why couldn't Sonic or Tails or Knuckles or SHadow or Merlin or any of the heroes have done that? Oh, because Flynn didn't need a twist and a way to write Bunnie out of the plot.

The Solution: Don't do it, and get her out of the plot by having her stay behind to guard Mobotropolis with Rotor. Look, I know that means that Team Freedom won't be so 'new', but I don't think anyone will complain if Bunnie is included instead of Big the Cat, nor was anyone clamouring for his return, considering that negative reaction to his possible appearance in Generations was great enough for SEGA to actually remove him from the game.


10) Shooting fish in a barrel.

The Twist: Antoine is blown up by a Metal Sonic in the middle of a fight.

The Problem: This was done solely to write Antoine out of the plot and make things seem worse for the heroes. The problem is, aside from 235, the heroes never once act like things are any different that usual for them. Same stupid plans, same lack of focus, same poor quality wisecracks. So why try to force a Darkest Hour if it's not going to have any major effect on the heroes? Oh, right, shocking swerves.

The Solution: See number 9.


11) You know, for kids!

The Twist: Mecha Sally has been carved apart, and large parts of her internal systems have been replaced with guns, as well as her shell being cut apart and replaced, at least half of her processor replaced with a gun, and her core/spark/robot heart/whatever has been replaced with a ring battery that frequently conks out. This also means that it's almost impossible for her to be deroboticized by normal means.

The Problem: Again, just read that again and tell me if you think that should be included in a kids' comic. If you say yes, you're probably screwed up in the head. Worse, Sally's optics are clearly lit up when Eggman goes for her with the blowtorch, and it's established canon that Robians have all of their senses intact, they just have no power to stop themselves. So Sally felt her body being cut open and taken apart. Of course, it might not be a problem now, but only because she might have been lobotmized when her brain was taken apart to squeeze another gun into her skull.

The Solution: Just... just don't.

12) Define 'Traitor.'

The Twist: The 'traitor' that Silver has been searching for is in fact Sally.

The Problem: Sally can not in any way be classed as a traitor. She's under mind control, and has no way to stop herself. Yet Silver still describes her as the traitor, despite knowing this. He doesn't say "We made a mistake: There is no traitor, the culprit was brainwashed." He calls her a traitor. This is also revealed without Silver investigating Tails or Nicole, and he doesn't properly investigate Bunnie, just drop it after Sonic gets pissed at him. It is also spelled out by Harvey Who. Harvey is not only smarter than Silver, and would tell Silver that he has made a mistake in his condemnation, but, also, is not from the future and should not in any way know about Silver's mission or his investigation.


There are probably more than these, but this is my list so far. Feel free to suggest more entries if you like. The fact remains that these are examples of shock twists, and are all bad writing.

Winners of the Redesign Contest!

Journal Entry: Fri Jun 14, 2013, 1:35 PM
Skin by =SprinklesPegasister

It is now June 14th, and time to reveal the winners of the Redesign contest!


This was one of my hardest contests, submission wise.
There were many amazing entries and it was hard to pick just 4 people to win.

So, to 2nd place winners, they will get 20 points and a custom pony.
3rd place winners will get 30 points.

So, I'll get on with it.

Rosehip


1st Place Winner: ~TheRainbowDalek 


Although drawn on paper and taken by camera, the design they created captivated me. 
It was simple, but beautiful. I love the added streak in her mane, and the background for the cutie mark is well thought out. 
The very faint accessories of a few piercings and bracelets make her look unique, but still doesn't take the attention away from the pony herself. 
Th personality is also what I was secretly aiming for. Shy yet friendly.
Well done.

2nd Place Winner: ~chochang55


The reason I chose this one as second place is because I loved the simplistic look of the black bow and black and white cutie mark. It does not match her color scheme, yet it looks wonderful on her. The ponytail is also a cute ad on, but if her bangs went up a bit higher she would've looks even better. 
I'm not sure what the cutie mark is exactly, I know its a flower. (Maybe a white rose?) but whatever the case; this was a wonderful entry.

3rd Place Winner: *Thunder-Waffles


I know, many of you must be surprised to see this entry as 3rd place.
But the main reason is I felt her accessories and mane were a bit TOO much.
She won spot on 3rd place because I loved the mane design style, and the cutie mark and personality was completely unique from the other entries. 
But I couldn't get around the idea of so many accessories on her and the way the color went into the mane. I was hoping for a natural feel to her, yet the zigzag look is an un-natural paint job; and wasn't what I was hopeing for.
This entry was amazing to look at, yes; but wasn't what I was looking for for Rosehip.

Honorable Mention(s)




Peppy Spice


1st Place Winner: *YingerySharpclaws


This entry was beautiful. I liked how you made her look like a lady instead of the tomboy look she has at first. Being creative, I like the pink jalapeno idea for the cutie mark (lol)
The accessories you gave her make her fun to look at, but its not too overwhelming that it takes attention away from  who she is. I also like how you drew in the white flank marking, it seems to combine well with the cutie mark. 

2nd Place Winner: *PinkPopcornWithSoda


The pooffy mane was unique, I thought the look suited her; but it wasn't exactly enough to win me over. The cutie mark idea is different from all the others, but I felt it was a bit too non-specific, and if you didn't write what it was in the description I would've have known :heart: But it is a nice entry, nonetheless

3rd Place Winner: ~Paintingkitteh


For some reason, I liked the ponytail on top of her head like that. It definitely gave a personality to the entry. The pepper sundae was an interesting cutie mark, since its spicy and sweet.. but it made me wonder if her destiny was to make odd ice creams or combine weird combinations of food? (Also, you forgot the markings)
It seems like you were going for the tomboy pony personality in this, if not, thats just what I saw. This was a cute entry, and made me giggle.

Honorable Mention(s)




Shadow Beat


1st Place Winner: *Dead-Pwny


This was so unfair, there so many AMAZING entries for Shadow Beat, it was SO HARD to decide... but in the end I felt *Dead-Pwny is to win.
This entry was perfect. Her mane is nice and fluffy and cute, I LOVE the faint pixel look you gave under her eyes, the cutie mark is brilliant and the arm warmer is a cute accessory that makes you want to hug her. I dont even think she needs the bow, because her mane is cute enough the way it is. Take good care of her!~

2nd Place Winner: *AverageLeaf


It was hard to choose between this entry and *Dead-Pwny's. I loved the idea of showing different phases, and styles. And the cutie mark is an amazing idea; I feel you should keep it and use it for another pony. I liked the second look better, btw (xD) 

3rd Place Winner: *UnicornsOnFire


The fact that it was submitted with another contest entry did not bug me one bit.
Between this one and the other 2, it was extremely difficult to pick a winner from.
The mane style on this one was adorable, and I felt it really suited her. Shadow Beat was definitely my most popular of the group..

Honorable Mention(s)










Mirage


1st Place Winner: ~cutecutederpypony14


This was another hard one to choose from. (No she did not win just because of the Creeper... actually I could've done without the cut out creeper there.)
But the reason I decided her to win, was because I loved the design. 
The fangs are an adorable touch, and since they could be caps, it doesnt change the species.
The wing tips dyed black was a nice touch, and made her more interesting to look at.
It almost gives her a punk look instead of the pretty or elegant look most alicorn OC's have.
The mane is also one much like I would've designed myself

2nd Place Winner: *vega37


I love the mane, I just felt it was a little TOO much for her image. I understood what you were going for, and I love the cutie mark idea, but I felt the mane was a bit overwhelming. Beautiful, but overwheming. but dont be afraid to use the mane style on another OC

3rd Place Winner: ~SaraHardy01


This was an adorable entry, and it made picking a winner of the top 3 a bit more difficult, but I will be honest.. the mane kinda reminded me of Luna a bit. 

Honorable Mention(s)






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Congratulations to the winners!


Please be good sports about this, the winners I selected deserve it. 
It was very hard for me to judge fairly to everyone, so please, be nice to one another when discussing or congratulating.

I will send the 2nd Place winners their points and comment asking for the custom pony information.

I will send the 3rd place winners their points as well.

Hope you all had fun, and keep an eye out for my next contest!


So I have decided to feature ALL of the dA art I have ever requested, commissioned, or had an art trade with! While this remains up, I will add any new artworks I request, commish, or art trade. I will also include random gift arts I had been lucky to receive ^o^

Now, let us begin!

First, COMMISSIONS! Ones I had to pay points for, or were a special free offer for a limited time and I got lucky enough to snag it!

Goutte d'eau by :iconaione-chan:

At one of my favorite roleplaying forums, we also had a point system and I bought this commish, which she uploaded her. It's my OC Nadeshiko (but NOT the Crimson Shadows one) that I roleplay (I need to get back to that board...missed the activity check one day >.<) This was part of a special event that was happening, when certain characters went missing and we tried to go out and find them! I really loved how this turned out <3

The Knight by :iconladyblackkill:

I had commissioned a girl in an action pose, and this was the result~ I LOVED it! The effects, her swords, her bandages....she has a boyish and rough look about her, but she is EPIC! I plan to use her as a character portrait in text roleplays ^o^

Cadence sketch by :iconanim3manga:

I was lucky to discover this person's commission, I love their art and it's at a good price! So I ordered one of my lovely OC, Cadence Mizukage. Perfect expression, looks really good for a sketch!

Satomi and Trevor sketch by :iconanim3manga:

I really loved commissioning her, so I commissioned her again to draw my other OCs, Satomi and Trevor! Isn't it just GORGEOUS?! This one really shows their relationship.

Aaron and Cadence lineart by :iconamyamateur:

I discovered Amy doing commissions, and ordered a lineart of my other lovely OC couple, Aaron and Cadence! Looks pretty, ne? I need to color this ^o^

Cliff and Shuang by :iconazurextwilight-rllz:

I've always wanted to commish azure, so I decided to commish one of my fave couples from her VN, Doppelganger: Dawn of The Inverted Soul, Clifford and Shuang! I ordered it as a lineart and plan to make it my desktop! In fact, I already began coloring it, see? [link]

UTAUloid Misora Haru for fanmade "Fennec" PV by :iconamyamateur:
 
I loved Amy's art so much, I just HAD to commission her for a special project - a fanmade PV of the UTAU original "Fennec", originally sung by Hane Riri. It was the first time I had ever used Misora Haru and felt proud since I figured out how to work UTAU. The .ust was also good, since it was the official from the creator. Amy did AN EXCELLENT job at drawing Haru! She really looks like her own person, since many have said she looks like Hatsune Miku, but Amy has proved otherwise! Here was the result with these excellent pictures in the actual video; [link]

UTAUloid Jero by :iconranivius:

I lucked out! Mr. Ranivius had a special offer of free commissions for everyone, as a practice run. I fell in LOVE with the high quality art and coloring and HAD to get one! I commish'd a fanart of one of my favorite UTAUloid, Jero, who I like to ship with Misora Haru. This turned out EPIC! This picture even inspired me to write one of my originals yet to be composed "Yorisal, Geshingah" (Assarian; Yes, so it begins). [link]
However, I will most likely use this picture for Jero covering "A Thousand Year Solo", if I am allowed to.

UTAUloid Misora Haru by :iconjj4evalol:

More Haru art is good art! She looks completely adorable here, and the coloring is EXCELLENT!

Sketch Commission: Trevor and Satomi by :iconsferath:

I LOVE Sferath's drawing style, and it's so cool to see my lovely OC couple to be drawn in it! Haha, I love how Satomi looks so tsundere here, and Trevor's CLEARLY enjoying it! XD

Gerald and Mike by :iconxxnekochan99xx:

Because more Re:Set art is good art. I commissioned this as a little gift to Azure~ I also wanted to give this new, rising artist some business! I like how this turned out. It's so shiny! *o*

Gerald, Chro, and Satomi by :iconxxnekochan99xx::

A returning customers, I am!! I was happy with the results previously, and decided to give more business...this time, I wanted it to be traditional color! This is a semi gift to both Azure and Chronica, as I wanted my lovely Satomi to be present, just 'cause XD!! The outcome I had described was done perfectly! Satomi has the face like "Seriously?" (so her), and then Chro, our beloved Handsome Man Hunter begins to take photos of Gerald, who seems a bit taken aback. I mean, come on, Gerald definitely is a handsome man, so if Chro was in his space this would definitely happen! XD

Satomi meets Lucia by :iconrooari:

Since both Azure and I have OCs with glasses that are very smart, I wanted to know what they would look like in a picture together. Now, this is the Re:Set version of Lucia, 'cause I thought it'd be cool for Satomi to meet that one. Turned out quite lovely, and I adore the coloring style~

Satomi by :iconchibiakita:
Special low-priced commissions up 'till Christmas, what a deal! So I ordered onme of my lovely Satomi and I was AMAZED how it turned out! I love her hair, her posture, her eyes, and the inking skill is very professional~

For JeroxHaru fanmade PV for an UTAU "Tsugai Kogarashi" cover by :iconxxnekochan99xx:
 
Currently, only 1 of 6 images. Haru looks SO CUTE here, and looks really good in Meiko's "Tsugai Kogarashi" outfit! 

Second, NOW LET'S LOOK AT THOSE LOVELY GIFTS AND SURPRISES~ Fanart or gift art that has been given to me~ I LOVE YOU ALL!!!

Cadence fanart by :iconselenaloong:

OHMYGOSH THIS WAS SUCH A SURPRISED THE FIRST TIME I GOT IT!! Selena-chan's artwork here is THE FIRST Crimson Shadows fanart! I love her so much for this! I will cherish it forever <333

Grove of Tanglechord by :iconaione-chan:

Look at this amazing group picture of the heroes and heroines of Grove of Tanglechord!! This was based on the event of "Tears To Roses" looking for missing students mini event, and she decided to draw all of us (er, our charries anyway) in a group picture! Look how fluffeh meh hair is! <33

Nadeshiko by :iconrmcpizza:

This...was such a surprise!! When I had requested my little Nadeshiko to be drawn, someone else saw it and then I suddenly get this surprise note and THIS fanart! You have no idea how happy I was to see someone draw another CS fanart at will, thank you so much for this!!! <333

Third, REQUESTS! Made by the kind people who are offering their art to be drawn for free~

Satomi headshot sketch by :iconllolipop4ever:

Lovely little sketch of Satomi, based on the ref I gave. I like how the only colored item is her hair tie <3

Rendered Trevor by :iconforfeit-ice:

I needed to see him in color 'cause I had been too lazy!! When I saw requests being done by this new artist, I knew I HAD to get one to test their skills and they passed <33 I didn't expect to get a rendered image! He looks really cool, and his face sorta reminds me of UTAUloid Jero for some reason ^.^

Trevor quick sketch by :iconmorgane13:

Trevor needed more drawings, and this quick sketch ended up really cool. For some reason, he reminds me of some dude in an anime...but I can't put my finger on it...

Boy and Girl by :iconhowtobeast101:

Based off the volume 1 cover, Takayoshi and Nadeshiko from my manga, a sketch version! I like how their shirts are inked in. Makes me want to draw a variation like that of their uniforms~

Girl by :iconhowtobeast101:

Based on another ref I gave, sketch version. This artist was very kind to offer me another free request, which I didn't expect! She's a bit chunky her, but still cute and I love how it looks like an imitation of my style *.*

Darkness to Lightness by :iconravenvillanuevat2p:

I thought it was about time to see some Asako Hanayuki fanart, even though she's a super minor character in my manga! I've always loved her design and I like how this request turned out! Very, VERY fitting for the Crimson Shadows atmosphere.

Aaron Murasaki by :icontokomandala:

THOSE PANTS!!! I LOVE THEM, THEY'RE BAGGY!!! Aaron looks quite good here, don'cha think?

Misora Haru by :iconyuki-natuski-24:

This was the first fanart I had asked for for my friend's UTAUloid. I think it looks cute how she is jumping in the air, and I had requested it for a possible use in a Misora Haru cover...I think I'll use it for a light and fluffy song.

Sketch of Nadeshiko by :iconsteampunk08:

ARTIST: Here it is! I hope you love it!
ME: KYAAAH, YES, YES I LOVE IT!!!!! <333

Asako Hanayuki by :iconmikarimelody:

This turned out AWESOME! I like how happy she looks and the clothes she's wearing. This looks like her as a teenager~

Satomi sketch by :iconbnnm040:

Ohoho~ PERFECT expression for Satomi right there. This is how she always feels when she sees her idiot colleagues at work XD

Yume sprite by :iconeunbinlee:

A visual novel sprite I had requested for one of my special games~ She tunred out EXACTLY how I pictured her in my head!

Yuuko by :iconarwiie:

I requested this as a Mother's Day gift for my mom! Yuuko Ichihara is one of her favorite characters, and this one ended up lovely and elegant~

Fanart Requests by :iconvoiii:

This is a WHOLE BUNCH of requests in one picture by many other people. My request is the one of Yuki Cross from Vampire Knight (she's the one at the top right corner), I had also requested this for my mom since she's a big Vampire Knight fan! I like how she turned out and her pose is just perfect~

Aaron Murasaki by :iconrainsushi:

WHAT EPIC COLORING *O* And I like his ears...it makes him look sort of elvish~

IT'S ABOUT TO RAIN!! little person by :iconslugburger:

Of my FIRST adoptable I adopted. This turned out rather interesting and the clothes were PERFECT!! <33

Nadeshiko by :iconruri-tan:

*O* MOE-NESS!!!!! I had just been proven that Nadeshiko CAN get cuter!!! This is probably the cutest drawing of her ever!!! It's really amazing. I love her big eyes and that bright, happy smile~ <3333

Cardcaptor Ritsuka sketch by :iconlexi247:

This is of my fanfiction OC, Cardcaptor Ritsuka. I love her warm expression here, and the winged star there being the only thing in color. Adds a magical effect <33

Lastly, but not least, ART TRADE HALVES! I still owe you guys some, so this also works as my to-do list~

Moonlit by :iconsanerkai:

She looks utterly adorable! This was actual as a gift to Marshmellow Muffin, her magic girl character Moonlit! My half; COMPLETE, BUT NOT POSTED

Satomi by :iconsaresai:

OHMYGOODNESS....!!!!! THIS, MY FRIEND, IS HOW SATOMI'S SUPPOSED TO LOOK LIKE! Sai-chan had captured exactly how Satomi looks in my head, the way I WISH I could draw her! This was totally amazing and is one I cherish so much <33 My half of this art trade was completed~

Nadeshiko cosplays as Mayuri Shiina by :iconzystefryw:

This...is...amazing!! I love her style and Nadeshik oreally looks good in Mayuri's clothes, ne? My half; NOT DONE...I AM SO SORRY FOR THE WAIT, I will get this done and make it up to you somehow!!

Good Times by :iconoo-bea95-oo:

Her art style is so cute so I had to see my lovely little OC pairing get drawn! I love the coloring and they look so cute! My art trade half for this was completed~

Satomi Hiroyama sketch by :iconk1-1yb0:

It was a sketch trade, and OHMYGOSH! Satomi looks both cute and sexy at the same time!! Wonderful work and shadowing! My half of this art trade was completed~

Crimson Shadows by :icongravegirl94:

This...was....SO AMAZING!!!! The dark background, the coloring, and I like their expression and how they are looking in the distance! My art trade half is not completed...don't worry, I will draw what I owe!

Brother Aaron? by :iconshinjidua:

Ohmygosh, THE CONCEPT OF THIS!! It's suppose to be through the eyes of Nadeshiko, his little sister. Aaron looks awesome here! I SO OWE YOU A LOT FOR THIS, I WILL DRAW THEM DREAM MASCOTS!!

Rendered Satomi by :iconsweetmoonmaiden:

I-I didn't know Satomi coule ever look adorable like this, but she can!! I like how she's innocently putting her finger in her mouth, looking slightly baby-ish! I LOVE IT! I am gonna get on my half, soon!!

Mayuri Shiina by :iconsecondary-target:

I like how this is almost imitating huke's style, but is still SECONDARY-TARGET'S only style on top of that! Mayuri from Steins;Gate looks SO PERFECT! This was a special Steins;Gate art trade...my half will be Okabe and Kurisu, which I'll be starting very soon ^.- I WILL MAKE IT AWESOME!!! I'll ever blend it, since your half looks so awesome!!


....and that's all I could find of all the art I have ever commish'd, requested, or received. I know there's been a few more, but they've strangely disappeared. The more art I request or receives gets done, the more I will update this. It's summer time, so I've been drawing LIKE CRAZY! Remember, I am open for commissions and I MIGHT add some more art trades to my to-do list if you're game~ More art to be featured as they come, who knows? It could be YOU if you draw me something *evil grin* But in all seriousness...

A HUGE THANK YOU to all the artists who have drawn me these! I really appreciate, and to those I owe art trade halves to...I will do my best to get them up REAL soon!

Character Masterlist

Journal Entry: Sat Jun 15, 2013, 2:14 AM


I will soon start updating this journal with all of my characters. And I mean a masterlist containing every. Single. One. of my characters.
Two words: brace yourselves.
 
Characters will be divided according to headworld they live in, project or species. It depends. Links will be added once I have them. uvu


Personal Characters 
#1 - Antares
Gender - Female
Age - 19
Species - Human
Purpose - Persona
Additional Informations - Antares and me are the same. She represents me 100%.

#2 - Zanarkand
Gender - Male
Age - 22
Species - Khandú
Purpose - Soul Character
Additional Informations - Zanarkand and Zane are the same being, and yet different. While Zane belongs to Shards of Glory, Zanarkand is a multifandom character and serves the purpose of Antares' best friend. Zanarkand is an AU character, while Zane is the "real" one.

#3 - Mikail Valentine
Gender - Male
Age - Unknown
Species - Unknown
Purpose - Antares' friend
Additional Informations - Mikail has an open gash on his belly. It never stops bleeding, and needs constant care and cleaning so that it doesn't get infected.

#4 - Mars
Gender - Female
Age - 19
Species - LemurDragon / Shapeshifter
Purpose - Fursona / Persona
Additional Informations - Multifandom, she can be put in whatever pre-existing universe.

#5 - Skye
Gender - Male
Age - 19
Species - Unknown
Purpose - Original Character
Additional Informations - Multifandom. Mars' best friend.

#6 - Kivuli
Gender - Male
Age - 19
Species - Silver Shining Dragon
Element - Shadows 
Additional Informations - Hates ice and cold weather, even though he belongs to a species used to cold climates. Considers Mars some sort of older sister. Shiroi and Soren's adoptive brother. He preferred to stay with Mars rather than fighting for Shiroi's pack's leadership.

#7 - Yuri
Gender - Male
Age - Depends 
Species - LemurDragon / Dragonwolf hybrid / Shapeshifter
Element - Fire
Additional Informations - Mars and ???'s son in an Alternate Universe. Rather bad mouthed as he grows up, and desperate to find a girlfriend. Tries too much. 





Personal Stories


Shards Of Glory
#1 - Zane Trewlawney aka "Zanarkand"
Gender - Male
Age - 22 years old (220 by human years. Still looks 22) 
Species - Khandú
Ability - Aura Shift
Location - Glory City
Additional Information - Important! Alternate Universe set in 2130 for Post Apocalyptic settings has Zane, not Zanarkand in it.


#2 - Riley Samson
Gender - Male
Age - 29
Species - Marashi, Type B. Fennec Fox 
Ability - Electricity / Wind Control
Location - Glory City


#3 - Sheila Leonel
Gender - Female
Age - 19
Species - Marashi, Type A. GSD/Golden Retriever hybrid
Ability - ???
Location - Glory City


#4 - Joey ???
Gender - Male
Age - 24
Species - Marashi, Type B. Fox
Ability - Healing Powers
Location - Glory City


#5 - April ???
Gender - Female
Age - 9
Species - Marashi, Type B. Fox
Ability - Turns material into gold
Location - Glory City


#6 - Flynn MacKenzie aka Macintosh
Gender - Male
Age - 21
Species - Marashi/Human Hybrid. Type C. Deer, hare, human.
Ability - None
Location - Glory City


#7 - Adrian Carter
Gender - Male
Age - 30
Species - Human. 
Ability - Shadow Shifter
Location - Glory City


#8 - Ares Miller
Gender - Male
Age - 28
Species - Human. Modified by Arc Industries.
Ability - Psychic Powers / Telekinesis
Location - Glory City


#9 - Kaito Clifford
Gender - Male
Age - 27
Species - Soul Dragon
Ability - ???
Location - Torre Vittoria


#10 - Kieran Taylor
Gender - Male
Age - 28
Species - Human. Modified by Arc Industries.
Ability - Shifter
Location - Glory City


#11 - Ryan Redcliff
Gender - Male
Age - 24
Species - Demon 
Ability - Fire Control
Location - Glory City


#12 - Annabelle Travers
Gender - Female
Age - 26
Species - Marashi, Type A. Spotted Hyena
Ability - Mind Reading
Location - Glory City
Additional Informations - Massively hipster.


#13 - Celine Zdorov
Gender - Female
Age - 21
Species - Rukia Dragon (Water)
Ability - Water Drain
Location - Unknown. She's a traveler


#14 - Goldwin Maxwell
Gender - Male
Age - 21
Species - Wingless Dragon.
Ability - Shifter
Location - Glory City


#15 - Aedan Riverstone
Gender - Male 
Age - 24
Species - Human
Ability - Shifter
Location - Torre Vittoria


#16 - Chase Clarke
Gender - Male
Age - 29
Species - Marashi, Type A. German Shepherd
Ability - None
Location - Torre Vittoria


#17 - Russel Volker
Gender - Male
Age - 30
Species - Human
Ability - Shifter
Location - Torre Vittoria


#18 - Jericho Cross
Gender - Male
Age - 23
Species - Marashi, Type B, Land Shark
Ability - None
Location - Glory City


#19 - Claude Marlowe
Gender - Male
Age - 20
Species - Marashi, Type A, Land Shark
Ability - None
Location - Glory City


#20 - Lacrima Fields
Gender - Female
Age - 19
Species - Marashi, Type A, DragonShark
Ability - None
Location - Glory City


#21 - Layla Miller (not related to Ares)
Gender - Female
Age - 20
Species - Rukia Dragon (Healing)
Ability - Healing Powers
Location - Glory City


#22 - Damien Williams
Gender - Male
Age - 20
Species - Dragon, one of a kind. Quetzalcoatl.
Ability - Electricity Control
Location - Glory City

#23 - Lycandra Summers
Gender - Female
Age - 28
Species - Rukia Dragon (Light)
Ability - Blinding and Guiding Powers
Location - Glory City

#24 - Faith Meyer
Gender - Female
Age - ???
Species - ???
Ability - ???
Location - Glory City
Additional Informations - WIP character. 

#25 - Ratface
Gender - Male
Age - 46
Species - Marashi, Type A. Rat.
Ability - ???
Location - Glory City
Additional Informations - WIP character

#26 - The Illusionist
Gender - Female
Age - ???
Species - ???
Ability - ???
Location - Glory City
Additional Informations - WIP character. Extremely important.

#27 - ???
Gender - Male
Age - ???
Species - ???
Ability - ???
Location - Glory City
Additional Informations - WIP character. Secret character. Extremely important.


LOCK

#1 - Aiden
Gender - Male
Age - 16
Species - Unknown
Ability - Unknown

#2 - Jacques
Gender - Male
Age - ???
Species - Cheshire Cat
Ability - Released Form: Monster / Cheshire Cat Form

#3 - Leroy Lexington
Gender - Male
Age - 21
Species - Unknown
Ability - Released Form: Monster


Final Fantasy: Rage Of The Eidolons

#1 - Ikiziel Silentwill
Gender - Male
Age - 22
Species - Human
Specialization - Thief
Attack - 6/10
Magic - 5/10
Weapon - Sword: Gladius

#2 - Speciment #307 AKA Three
Gender - Female
Age - Unknown
Species - Unknown
Specialization - Attacker
Attack - 9/10
Magic - 3/10
Weapon - None

#3 - Mikaela Keyfer
Gender - Female
Age - 19
Species - Human
Specialization - Healer / Summoner
Attack - 2/10
Magic - 9/10
Weapon - Magic Staff/Spear

#4 - Colin Ark
Gender - Male
Age - 16
Species - Human
Specialization - Varied Style, Balanced
Attack - 5/10
Magic - 7/10
Weapon - Electronic Skateboard

#5 - Gilbert Galloway
Gender - Male
Age - 22
Species - Human
Specialization - Attacker
Attack - 7/10
Magic - 7/10
Weapon - Broadsword: Aural Blade
Additional Information: RotE!Gilbert is an AU character added due to lack of other fitting characters. 

#6 - Bandi
Gender - Male
Age - Unknown
Species - Living Puppet
Specialization - Black Magic
Attack - 3/10
Magic - 8/10
Weapon - Gloves



Other Characters


The Circus

#1 - Liam
Gender - Male
Age - Supposed to be 25
Species - Kenomonimi: Cat
Title - The Puppeteer: Lord Of The Freak Show
Additional Informations - The owner of a circus that takes in both amazing actors and freaks.

#2 - Xeno
Gender - Male
Age - Unknown
Species - Unknown. Supposedly Demonic Creature
Title - The Silenced One
Additional Informations - Taken in by Liam. 


Other


#3 - Nihil
Gender - Female, androgynous
Age - Ageless
Species - Demon
Ability - None
Additional Informations - She has no feelings but love. She's a sort of representation of the adversities I have to go through.

#4 - Veol
Gender - Male 
Sex - Somewhat Genderfluid
Age - 19
Species - Unknown
Ability - Can move his hair (think Midna from TP)
Additional Informations - Multifandom. Also needs to feel loved to survive.

#5 - Pandalecko
Gender - Male
Age - 19
Species - Faun
Ability - Shapeshifting. Faun, Harpy and Human forms
Additional Informations - Jensen's best friend. Owns a ferret called Tik-tik

#6 - Jensen
Gender - Male
Age - 18
Species - Snake Demon
Ability - Retractable skeleton-like wings
Additional Informations - Pandalecko's best friend. Has snake-like habits in the eating field. There was an accident with Pan's ferret.

#7 - Seraphim Aster
Gender - Male
Age - 25
Species - Dracophoenix
Ability - Shifting to dracophoenix form
Additional Informations - Bass guitar player. Really really gay for Puck.

#8 - Akin
Gender - Male
Age - 27
Species - Naga
Ability - Mild fire control
Additional Informations - Eats nothing but vegetables, fruits, eggs and rarely cooked fish.

#9 - Mango
Gender - Male
Age - 19
Species - Mishwed (*Homohelvetti)
Ability - Mushrooms give different emotional rushes and urges.

#10 - Torpedo
Gender - Male
Age - 28
Species - MTT (*annicron)
Ability - Shifts to humanoid form. 
Job - Stripper / Club bodyguard. 

#11 - Misha "Mirach" Elwood
Gender - Male
Age - 20
Species - Stellario
Ability - None
Job - Fortune Teller

#12 - Jenna
Gender - Female
Age - 19
Species - Monster Hybrid
Ability - Best baker in the world
Additional Informations - Real name is Jenilee. Don't call her a monster.

#13 - Denzel
Gender - Male
Age - Unknown
Species - Unknown. Supposedly draconic / canine hybrid
Ability - Master of Ground. 
Additional Informations - Avoids contacts with humans as much as possible. However, he enjoys Soren's company

#14 - Soren
Gender - Male
Age - 17
Species - Silver Shining Dragon (*Aurora-Silver)
Ability - Master of Wind
Additional Informations - Belongs to Shiroi's "pack", although he lives among the humans. Good friends of Denzel. Prefers his human form. Kivuli and Shiroi's adoptive brother.
 
#15 - Shiroi
Gender - Male
Age - 18
Species - Silver Shining Dragon (*Aurora-Silver)
Ability - Master of Ice
Additional Informations - Leader of a small pack of dragons and hybrids which lives among the humans, fully integrated in their society. He prefers his human form. Kivuli and Soren's adoptive brother.

#16 - Revolution
Gender - Male
Age - 3 dog years / 22 human years
Species - Sparkledog: GSD
Ability - Shifting from dog to human form.
Additional Informations - Sparkledog character I had in 2009 and that stuck with me so far.

#17 - Elijah Riechman
Gender - Male
Age - 15
Species - Monster Cat / Trickster Cat
Ability - Trickster form, transforms into a "werecat" when on sugar high.

#18 - Riley
Gender - Male 
Sex - Female
Age - 20
Species - Unknown Hybrid
Ability - None
Location - 2130 Post Apocalyptic World

Fan Characters


Pokemon Characters + Nuzlocke

#1 - Cloud 
Gender - Male
Species - Garchomp (gijinka)
Moves - Dragon Rush, Dragon Claw, Earthquake, Aerial Ace


#2 - Viktor
Gender - Male
Species - Bisharp (gijinka)
Moves - Night Slash, Psycho Cut (EM), Poison Jab, Iron Head


#3 - Samuel
Gender - Male
Species - Furret (Shiny, gijinka)
Moves - Attract, Hyper Voice, Slam, Focus Energy (EM)


#4 - "Ironspike"
Gender - Male
Species - Gliscor (gijinka)
Moves - X-Scissor, Venoshock, Payback, Swords Dance


#5 - Kide
Gender - Agender. Masculine in appearance.
Species - Lugia (gijinka)
Moves - Aeroblast, Extrasensory, Recover, Dragon Tail


#6 - Kieron
Gender - Male
Species - Umbreon (shiny, gijinka)
Moves - Confuse Ray, Moonlight, Work Up, Facade


#6 - Hollow
Gender - Female
Species - Umbreon (gijinka)
Moves - Faint Attack, Shadow Ball, Psychic, Attract



#7 - Martin (Nuzlocke!)
Gender - Male
Age - 18
Ability - Blaze
Type Affinity - Fire and Flying
Additional Information - Ambra's older brother


#8 - Alexandra (Nuzlocke!)
Gender - Female
Age - 20
Ability - Intimidate
Type Affinity - Dark


#9 - Ambra (Nuzlocke!)
Gender - Female
Age - 15
Ability - Torrent
Type Affinity - Water
Additional Informations - Martin's younger sister



Final Fantasy / Kingdom Hearts Fan Characters

#1 - Luca
Gender - Male
Age - 19
Species - Human
Universe - Final Fantasy (any. Preferred VII)
Specialization - Attacker
Attack - 8/10
Magic - 4/10
Weapon - Dual Swords

#2 - ???
Gender - Female
Age - 20
Species - Human
Universe - Final Fantasy (any. Preferred VII)
Specialization - Varied
Attack - 5/10
Magic - 6/10
Weapon - Long ranged nunchaku
Additional Informations - Goes by Sunset. 

#3 - Jaron Bell AKA "Mint Man"
Gender - Male
Age - 18
Species - Human
Universe - Kingdom Hearts
Specialization - Keyblade Wielder: Speed and Magic
Additional Informations - Lost right eye during a tournament

#4 - Sheridan AKA Sharon
Gender - Female
Age - 15
Species - Human
Universe - Kingdom Hearts
Specialization - Synthetiser, Gravity User
Additional Informations - Mary Sue. She has the power to summon a Keyblade, but doesn't know how to control it.

#5 - Lysander Fireheart
Gender - Male
Age - 17
Species - Dragonic Mutt
Universe - Kingdom Hearts / Multifandom
Specialization - Keyblade Wielder: balanced
Additional Informations - Gary Stu. Has a human and a dragonic mutt form. 



Other Fan Characters


#1 - Coffee Song
Gender - Female
Species - Pegasus
Universe - MLP / Multifandom




...More still need to be added
Holy. Fucking. Shit.
And then there are THE ADOPTS I HAVE ADOPTED.

So far: 75













I wanted to save this too... But I modified it so that it's applicable to OCTs in general. OCTs may vary but some core things stay the same, so these are some general tips.

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If it's your first time in an OCT, the audition process can be a bit daunting - it's quite a bit of work, and there's a chance that you might not get into the first round by the end of it. The key thing to remember is that this process is the same for almost every OCT, and every experience will help.

Reference Sheet
This is a snapshot of your character that shows details so that your opponent can accurately portray them and any objects/side characters associated with them. Some OCTs may provide templates which you should follow to a T, and some may ask for more information than others. Beyond following instructions, these tips should hold out:

:bulletred: KEEP IT SIMPLE, STUPID (otherwise known as the KISS that doesn't come with black and white make up).

:bulletorange: Your reference sheet should SHOW as much as possible with only a few words to back it up. Don't feel the need to cover it in text. Only write about what you are showing when the image might not be clear.

:bulletyellow: Make sure that your image is in full colour so that artists who choose to do colour entries can know how to portray your character.

:bulletgreen: If something needs extra explanation put it in your artist's description. Keep this short too - no one wants to read a War and Peace length background of your character, just enough to give people a sense of how to portray the details that make you character who they are. If you're doing long paragraphs (more than four sentences), you're probably doing too much. If you have more than five - even short - paragraphs, you're probably doing too much.

:bulletpink: Make sure that you're not relying on your reference sheet to tell people about your character - it's a reference for your opponent to portray them accurately, or for the judges to see how your opponent is handling their portrayal. People should be able to read your comics without having to refer to it. Don't pull powers out of the blue and expect people to know what is happening, you have to show it properly rather than relying on people coming back to this sheet.

Here's an example of some details you might include in text, either on the sheet or in the artist description:

  • Name: Important, if only for how the judges can refer to them. eg.
    Princess Min

  • Age: If they're older or younger than they look, include that too. eg.
    Older than the hills, but maintains the appearance of a twentysomething

  • Height: For side-by-side reference. eg.
    18cm

  • Background: Where does your character come from? What has happened in their life that led to where they are today? Most times you should only need a few sentences explaining where they came from. You can develop the rest in your comics. eg.
    Princess Min is from the Tooth Fairy royal family, who for the past millennia have been keeping truce with humans by eating their children's teeth rather than their children's bones.
    Princess Min thinks the old ways are best.
    On reference sheet: 'Tooth fairy!' (Referring to crown, which is shaped like a tooth)

  • Personality: How do they act when meeting new people? Are they competitive? What drives them? What makes it change? Again, one short thing is all you need and you can develop anything else in your comics. Focus on what is core to them. eg.
    A little bit spoiled and self-confident, but follows through where it counts (on the violence).

  • Powers/Special Attacks/Special Weapons: Mostly these should be visually represented on your reference sheet. If it takes extra explanation, you need to think about how you will be able to portray it in a comic with minimal text so people know what is going on without having to come to this sheet. Again this should be short, and may just be an explanation of how they work eg.
    She lures children (...And sometimes Princesses) with her hipster-keytar covers of 50s classics, and then she and her drones rip them up and eat their bones for breakfast. Mmm Mmm, just like mamma used to make back in 100CE.
    On reference sheet: 'Totes hypnotic!', 'Keys made of teeth!', 'loves to play 50s tunes' (referring to keytar & its music), 'long fingers hidden by magic gloves', 'eyes and mouth closed when luring prey' (referring to alternate appearance of character) 'Drones: Loyal, obedient, vicious!' (Referring to image of a drone)


:bulletblue: Unless there is a specific template, information you put into your artist's description is usually optional, dependent on how well you think you can show things in your reference sheet and audition comic. After all, a couple of well thought out poses can give readers everything they need to know about your character's personality.

:bulletpurple: Don't be afraid to leave things open to interpretation, and don't worry about covering absolutely every base. Let your opponent come to you with questions or surprise you with their own spin on your character. Who knows, they might come up with something you'd like to incorporate into your own comics.

:bulletpink: Make sure to get your reference sheet out of the way early in an OCT's audition phase: Intro comics can sometimes still get through unfinished... Reference sheets not so much.

Here are just a few examples of a good reference sheet:


Audition Comic
Your audition is the first chance for judges to see what you've got, so put all your effort into it!

:bulletred: Remember that you will likely have less time to make comics during rounds. Start early and give yourself an early deadline (one that you can miss by a day or two and still be in time for the real one). This will give you an idea of how much you can do, and prevent you from missing the real deadline. Afterwards, you can adjust a page count in your head for rounds based on how well you did with your self imposed deadline.

:bulletorange: Don't hand in a 40 page audition just because you can. A long story is not necessarily a good one. If you can show the core aspects of your character in just three pages, then that should be all you need. If you need more and can do more, by all means make your comic as long as you want, but any OCT judge worth their salt should be looking for quality over quantity. I recommend a minimum of 3 and a maximum of 15, with a golden number somewhere between 5-10 pages.

:bulletyellow: If you're not sure what you can do or have had problems with time management in the past, see if you can produce a 3-6 page audition comic in just a week. You might be surprised by the results, and then you will have a complete entry that you can polish up (even add to if you feel the need) over the rest of the audition period.

:bulletgreen: If you are really cutting it close, submit pages as you complete them and make sure you get your reference sheet in early - this means that if you don't finish before the deadline passes, there is at least something for judges to give feedback on. If your entry is strong enough, even without a conclusion, it might just get through to the first round (though don't rely on that). Better yet, submit pages as you complete them anyway to stop your judges stressing about people entering the OCT.

:bulletblue: Most good OCTs won't accept anything submitted to them after their deadline passes, and it's likely that they will lock the audition folder to prevent you from trying to slip stuff in. The earlier you submit work the better. DeviantART is prone to errors and could cost you your entry if you leave it too late.

:bulletpurple: Creativity is key. No judge wants 20 pages of talking heads following the prompt in the first way that came to their head. Think outside the box, try something interesting and challenging, and find a way to make yourself stick out from the crowd.

:bulletpink: Black and white, coloured, shaded, flat colours, photographs, textless, strangely formatted, digital, traditional... As long as it fulfils the prompt, most OCTs will accept it. Take this as an opportunity! If you feel like you don't have time to colour your comic, experiment with some heavy black lines and shadows. If you feel like your story is a little flat, see if you can spice it up with an interesting comic format. Most judges love it when people push themselves to try new things, and even if it's not perfect, your best efforts will be looked on much more favourably than trudging out something rushed and ordinary.

Here are some great audition/intro comics:


That's it! Go forth and win a ton of OCTs
  • Listening to: You
  • Reading: You
  • Watching: You
  • Playing: You
  • Eating: You
  • Drinking: You
yeah I know it's kinda stupid but I'm feeling down and I needed something to cheer me up.

Stolen from ~SwiftilySquirrel

- Pick 10 of your OC in any order. If you don't have 10 characters use canon.

- Don't look at the questions while picking the characters!
- Link back to the blank.
- Have fun! 


PICK YOUR VICTIMS!

1. Janice
2.Silo
3.Asha
4.Jess
5.Mistress Shade
6.Crowsharks
7. Devin
8. Kia
9. Jonathan
10. Anniebells
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1. How will 1 (Janice) describe [6] (Crowsharks)?

Janice:He's so fluffy! And cute! And he's funny too! I think we'll be great friends.

2. [5] (M. Shade) and [4] (Jess) were locked in a closet together. What does [10](Tom) see when he/she found them? 

Anniebells: Heh, now we outnumber you! Attack!

3. For whatever reason, [7] (Devin) decides to kiss [2] (Silo). How does [2] (Silo) react?

Silo: I...I'm not gay. I like girls. Yes only girls for me. Yep. Not gay. *curls up into a ball and starts emitting a high-pitched noise*

Devin: Crap, I think I've broken him.

4. [2] (Silo) randomly walks in and sees [9] (Jonathan) is at least half naked. 

Silo: WHERE'D ALL YOUR FUR GO.

Jonathan: I DON'T KNOW HELP ME HELP ME


5. What is [3] (Asha) theme song? Favorite food if [3] (Asha) doesn't have theme song.

Hmmm, idk she has a lot of songs that fit her. Eyesore by Janus fits her really well, though.

Asha: And my favorite food is mousey!

6. And what is [8] (Kia) opinion about [3](Asha) theme song? ( If [3] doesn't have a theme song make [8] eats [3]'s wallet. )

Kia: It's pretty great, I guess? But more to the point YOU ARE AN ENEMY CAT

Asha: TAKE MY WALLET, WHATEVER THAT IS, AND LEAVE ME ALOOONE

7. [5] (M. Shade) has a drink in a bar and discovers [10] (Anniebells) is a strip dancer.

M.Shade: Heeeeey~, I know we hate each other but how about-

Anniebells: *flying kick to Shade's face*

8. So [5] (M.Shade) was completely drunk and wakes up in bed next to… [9] (Jonathan)and [1] (Janice)?!

M.Shade: Today is apparently seduce-your-enemies-day

Janice: Oh no, it was nothing like that! We just kidnapped you and stayed in bed with you so we could keep guard.

Jonathan: Yeah, I have a boyfriend you know.


9. Something exploded and now [2] (Silo), [6] (Crowsharks) and [1] (Janice) are gender bended! How do they react?

Silo/Tsilla: *is curled into a ball and emitting a high pitched screeching noise*

Crowsharks/Ravenrats: HehehehEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE

Janice/Janus: This is...interesting.


10. [1] (Janice) suddenly feels an urge to chase after unicorns. What do [3] (Asha)do to help him/her?

Janice:I'm going to find that unicorn!

Asha: Me too! I want a treecorn!

11. [4] (Jess) is getting married to a rainbow dinosaur. How did it happen? Does [7] (Devin) do anything about it?

Jess: I d-

Devin: Look, I don't know you but what is going on with this rainbow dinosaur thing?

Jess: I really have no idea. I suppose it must have put me under its rainbow spell.

12. [8] (Kia) is being chased by evil toys in a locked toy factory with a pen is his/her only weapon. Does he/she survive through the night?

Proooobably not. She's a pretty good fighter but y'know evil toys. I suppose she could hide somewhere.


13. [5] (M. Shade), [7] (Devin) and [10] (Anniebells) are having a picnic. Suddenly a giant pink doughnut falls out from the sky. Which one of them is likely to get hit by it?

M.Shade: OW doughnut!

Anniebells: *takes the opportunity to attack M.Shade*

Devin: *sits back and watches the fight while eating the doughnut*


14. [8] (Kia) stole [6] (Crowsharks) most valuable item (or person). What happen next?

Crowsharks: Give me my Jess back!

Kia: NOPE.

Jess: Lemme go!

15. [10] (Anniebells) found a Death Note! Who dies?

Anniebells: Hmmm, well that little ratbarb Shade, is a definite. I think everyone else I'd wanna kill's already dead. The only good part of being old.

16. [1] (Janice), [2] (Silo) and [4] (Asha) are stay in [9] (Jonathan)'s house while the house is surrounded by zombies! Wait, what do you mean [1] (Janice)was bitten by a zombie?

no. there is a literally no way to make this not terribly depressing. SILO WOULD PROBABLY BE THE ONE TO KILL JANICE I DID THIS TOO CHEER MYSELF UP NOT TO MAKE MYSELF EVEN MORE SAD

17. [7] (Devin) found a time machine. What does he/she do?

Devin: Gonna go back and save my brother. Also gonna find that Frozenclaw furball when he's a kid and punch him in his stupid face.

18. [3] (Asha), [4] (Jess) and [5] (M.Shade) decided to rob a bank. How does it go?

M. Shade: Okay Jess, you stay up front and distract the teller while Asha and I used our shadow powers to get into the vault and steal all the money.

Jess: How did I get roped into this?

Asha: I've never robbed a bank before, this'll be fun!

they probably succeed. Jess is still confused by the end of it.

19. Oh no! [8] (Kia) was hit by a fire truck! Who (in the list) will be the first one to show up in the hospital?

Devin: I'm sorry, I should have been there to protect you.

Kia: It was a FIRETRUCK. I don't see what you could have done.

20. Tag someone? If you don't do tagging, tell me [6] (Crowsharks)'s dark secret. 

since I doubt any of my friends want to do this meme

Crowsharks: I don't really keep secrets, because if I did Jess would get mad at me. But, um, I had a thing with a cat from Demi's gang a while ago? It didn't last long though, once he found out I was in Annibells's group he refused to see me anymore. 
Well, this year's E3 was alright.

Microsoft: Only good things was the trailer of MGSV (Metal Gear Solid) The Phantom Pain, Battlefield 4, The Witcher 3 (Man, I probably won't be able to play when it releases unless the devs opt for a multiplatform release but who knows) and Titanfall, though I may not play that, it does look good.

EA: Sports, sports, oh and even more sports! No seriously, that was major point of the EA conference was SPORTS! They show like brief teasers of good stuff such as Star Wars Battlefront (OH YEAH) and Mirror's Edge 2 (Damn it, EA. I wanted to see more of that instead of the sports games). Only non-sports game they showed with a bit more time was Battlefield 4 Multiplayer, looks fun.

Ubisoft: Missed it, so I can't say much on it. Ones that got me interested was Splinter Cell Blacklist, despite the change of the VA, I'm giving this game a chance (You hear that devs, don't fuck it up), Watch_Dogs (Of course), Assassin's Creed IV, though I'll wait after release to see if it's worth getting and Tom Clancy's The Division which looks very fun despite being a MMO.

Sony: Wow...my god. Sony really hit Microsoft in the balls on this one. I'm not kidding, go look at any reaction vid of that. Sony just pretty much PWNED Microsoft HARD when they stated they'll support used games and have no online restrictions. Oh and sell at $399 dollars vs MS's $499. Congrats, Sony. And to top if off, while it may not interest anyone but at the announcement, Square-Enix showed Final Fantasy XV (Originally, Final Fantasy Versus XIII) and Kingdom Hearts fucking III! OH MY GOD! :omfg: Oh yeah and games I'm looking out for is Beyond Two Souls, inFAMOUS Second Son, Killzone Shadow Fall, The Order 1886, Mad Max, Destiny and BATMAN ARKHAM ORIGINS. Sorry 'bout that. Lost myself for a second there.

Nintendo: Uh, yeah. I'm not a Nintendo person so I didn't pay much attention to it. ^^; Other than Bayonetta 2.

Well, have a good summer folks.